Craft:
Dislike: The filter on the altered piece was not well received in many of the critiques.
Like: They did like how good the photoshoppin gwas and tended to like the color scheme that I used.
Concept:
Like/Dislike: The concept was apparently unclear to nearly everybody, so there were no positives for the concept.
Composition:
Like: Some liked the sandwich and some others liked the color of the train and the combination from the original photo.
Dislike:
The filter was disliked widely with one reviewer saying it looked "Pee Colored".
What I intend to do to fix this:
I intend to modify the car and the sandwich so that it looks like the sandwich is a hobo riding the open rails. Hopefully by giving it a face and classic hobo garb it will appear that it is an abstract representation of an entirely possible condition for any person. This would have been especially true 60+ years ago.
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